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ГрамматикаA man of mould can’t be ideal,
I hide my feelings deep inside.
I see this painful world in real
And nothing rocks my foolish pride…
Sometimes a slight thing makes us happy
And unimportance makes us mad,
We always try to do as better,
We often lose the things we get.
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Don’t blame me for love
You can’t feel yourself,
Don’t let it to die
If it doesn’t end
Just let it survive
In me deep inside
Just try to believe
In such crazy love…
Just show me the way
To your lonely heart
Just give me the keys
Don’t leave me aside…
Don’t say it’s unreal,
And let me to show
The love that I feel,
The love you don’t know…
Don’t blame me for love
Don’t hide. Don’t forget,
Don’t let it to die
If it doesn’t end…
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It;s better to drink up it all,
Than make the stop in the middle,
It is better to show your true soul,
Than hide behind mask of virginity …
By coming into this world,
We're doomed for death however
So, tell me, how much does it cost
This life that sometimes so unbearable…
For light of a new bright day,
And for the darkness of night,
For the outcome of life,
For way that for me was done
I'm drinking a bowl untill end,
And brake it for luck and fortune,
I always will be with you...,
You now, I don't like departures...
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