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My name is Tatyana. I am twenty-nine years old. I am from Tomsk. I am a police officer. I work in the urban police Department. I'm a security officer. My rank is a senior Lieutenant of police. I work with secret documents. I am doing analytical work. I make the analysis of the committed crimes, various inquiries and reviews. Every month I sum up the results of the work of Criminal Investigation Department. I also go to the places of incidents as a member of investigating agencies. I'm occupied with examination of incidents place. I work with detainees. I am engaged in crime exposure. In the course of working over criminal cases I co-operate with the special police services. Now I am a first -year student of the correspondence Department.
19.03.2016
ну может кто ещё подправит)
19.03.2016
Я сама подправила )))
19.03.2016
а где? мне самой даже интересно
19.03.2016
1. Я оперуполномоченный - I am a detective.2. I work in the urban city police Department.3. Every month I sum up the results of the work of Criminal Investigation Department---> Every month I am bringing up the work of the Criminal Investigation Division. 4. I also go to the places of incidents as a member of investigating agencies.----> I also travel to the scene as part of the investigation group. 5. I work with detainees. ---> I deal with convicts and suspects 6. In the course of working over criminal cases I co-operate with the special police services. ---->During the work on criminal cases, I interact with the special police services.
19.03.2016
а в 3 пункте почему прогрессив употребляете?
19.03.2016
Эмм... а как?
20.03.2016
ну там вроде стоит показатель обычного времени simple - every
20.03.2016
Оставить так - Every month I sum up the work of the Criminal Investigation Division?
20.03.2016
я бы да)
20.03.2016
I work for the police department
20.03.2016
Спасибо. Все сдала )))
21.03.2016
Спасибо ))))
19.03.2016
Спасибо. Все сдала )))
21.03.2016
Помогите пожалуйста с переводом((( Писали сочинение с ребенком. Помогите проверить.