Девочки, кому не сложно...Проверьте))

ноутбук - laptop, потому что notebook - это блокнот.

А почему ты должна была накрасится?

а теперь настоящее:

Usually my morning starts at 7 o’clock when I hear my alarm-clock ringing. Thought sleepy I take a shower, wash my hair and do my (ты же не можешь делать чужую зарядку, лучше убрать my) morning exercises – (присяды and swing a press). Then I have to (почему тут долженствование?) make-up, hair dress and have a breakfast. my daughter gets up At eight o’clock  I put Alex on a pot, then wash her face and change clothes. While Alex plays with toys I open my laptop and enter different sites. Alex’s nurse (лучше сказать nanny, потому что nurse - это больше сиделка или медсестра) comes at 8.30 I give a kiss (лучше сказать просто kiss) my daughter and go to the work. I get to work by underground about 1.5 hours. My working day off at 20.00 I get my jacket, boots and go home. On my way home I go in a shop and buy some food. Sometimes I come to the clothes shop or perfumery shop) At home I greet mom and Alex, have a supper and watch tv at 22.00 Then we go to the bed and sleep.

Yesterdau I got up at 7... The alarm clock wakes me up every morninng and I hate it.

I felt sleepy, so I took a shower, washed my hair & did my morning exercises - (как присаживаться точно не знаю, скорее всего sit downs and а пресс качать - sit ups). Then I put my make up on, brushed my hair, put on clothes and had breakfast.

At 8.. my daughter got up.... While Alex was playing with toys I had opened my laptop and entered different websites. Then Alex's nurse came at 8.30, after that I gave my daughter a kiss and went to work. I travelled to work by tube for about hour and a half. My working day finished at 8 pm, I put on my jacket and boots and went home. On my way home I went to the shop and bought some food. At home I greeted Alex and my mom, had a supper and watched tv until 10 pm then we went to bed.

чуть позже напишу второй абзац)

А вот в настоящем времени и более продвинцтый уровень разговорного английского:)

Usually my morning starts at 7... when I hear my alarm-clock ringing. I take a shower if I still feel sleepy, wash my hair and do my morning exercises. Then I put my make up on, "get my hair done" - так говорят когда укладываю волосы, and have breakfast. My daughter gets up at 8, I put her on a pot then wash her face and change her clothes. While she plays her toys I open up my laptop and - лучше сказать лазяю в сети, чем посящаю сайты - and search the net. Usually Alex's nurse arrives at 8.30, I kiss my daughter goodbye and go to work. Everyday I get to work by tube, which takes me about hour and a half. My work day lasts until 8 pm, then I get my staff (clothes)  and make my way home. On the way I go to a shop and get some food. Sometimes I can also go perfume or clothes shopping.  When I arrive home I greet my mom and Alex, have dinner together and watch tv until 10pm. Then we go to bed.

Ириш, посмотри, может что-нибудь пригодится!